Balance of Pros and cons
First of all let me commend you on the tremendous effort you obviously put in this flash. The depth and colours were incredible as was the shading. Now, some bad points are definitely the music, wich I though was too soft for the beginning amd just too lame for the rest of the movie, and the bodies weren't to hot eithr, here I'm talking about the chubby golem and the square yet not very built guy that comes out of him.
Probably the worst part of this movie was when I finally figured out halfway in that this was EMO! GAAAAAAAAAAAH!!